The Veil War

"and then I was like, 'Holy crap, goblins!'"

Part Eight, the Ocho

It’s Veil War Thursday. And that means that today you get another chapter. Your teaser:

“What are they doing firing a half mile out?”

Lewis dropped the glasses. He watched the gray cloud of arrows climb skyward. It looks like they’ve got the distance…. And there goes another volley.

Evans was incredulous. “How the hell could anyone draw a bow that could shoot an arrow that goddamn far?”

Five flights of arrows were in the air when the first round hit. Those five hundred arrows hit the goblins like the wrath of god. “Holy mother of fuck!” Evans shouted.

“I don’t believe it. Every single one of those arrows hit.” Pethoukis said softly, stunned.

FYI: there will be no chapter next Thursday as I will be conducting a Christmas safari through the untamed wilds of northern and central Ohio before heading back to Virginia. Next year, we will resume our normal weekly schedule.

In recompense for not giving you your accustomed Veil War carnage, I will send a special bonus story to everyone who has signed up as an email follower or befriended the Veil War’s Facebook page. You may justly consider this as both a reward for being an early adopter, and an encouragement to become an early adopter.

The Really Big Idea

I’ve long been an admirer and follower of the Big Idea series at John Scalzi’s Whatever. I have bought more books based on a reading of a Big Idea post than from any other source. The only thing that even comes close is Cory Doctorow’s reviews at Boing Boing.

Hearing straight from the author why they wrote their book, and what issues they wrestled and pinned to the ground to get it done is a far better introduction than, well, just about anything short of actually reading the book. What it comes down to is that getting an insight into the mind of the author is far better than getting a look inside the mind of the marketing drone writing the back cover blurb.

The only downside to the Big Idea is that the Scalzi, in his wisdom, has limited participation: “The feature is open to all authors regardless of genre, fiction and non-fiction alike. …so long as their works are distributed to major bookstores on a returnable basis and are available on the following three American online book stores: Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and Powell’s.”

Well, that sucks.

I see what he’s doing, and why – and were I in his place I could imagine having similar restrictions. It’s a good filter.

Since I’ve become an independent author – all of a month and a half, now – I’ve been amazed at the help and advice I’ve gotten in the really short amount of time that I’ve been out here. Even among the independent publishing crowd, my method is a little outre – I’m serializing The Great American Goblin Invasion Novel, for free. A friend characterized my business plan in a way that you might find familiar:

  1. Get readers
  2. ???
  3. Profit!

Given that the Veil War has only been up for a few weeks, it is perhaps too early to judge the soundness of my plan. However, the fact that I do not, at this time, have a salable product – even an electronic one – has made me doubly ineligible for Scalzi’s estimable series. And, experiencing first hand the frustration of not meeting Scalzi’s qualifications for inclusion in his Big Idea series, it occurred to me that if I can’t do his Big Idea, maybe I can roll my own.

If imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, then this is some pretty awesome flattery. Here, then, is a nearly exact duplicate of John Scalzi’s Big Idea, with the sole difference being that the authors we are focusing on are the independent authors – ones who are not producing physical books being placed in the few remaining bookstores. Smaller presses, pure kindle sales, smashwords – the fringe of the publishing world.

It is my feeling that that the publishing industry is in the throes of great changes. Five years ago, a budding author’s course was obvious – get a finished manuscript into the hands of an agent and get a book printed and distributed. Five years from now, the new author’s couse will be equally obvious – and completely different. What that will end up being is being decided and created right now.

So here’s a big idea for the future – and we start with Ian Thomas Healy.

I’ve read a couple of Ian’s books with The Milkman being my favorite, a ripping funny yarn with swords, UFOs and flatulence.  I think Just Cause is moving up the list.

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How my Really Big Idea became a Smaller, Successful Idea

Just Cause has been the backbone of my creative expression for the past eight years, and has consistently been the one thing I return to when I feel the call for the comfort of familiarity instead of the exploration of the unknown. It started out as a Really Big Idea. I wanted to take the joyous feeling of reading a superhero comic book and stretch it out into novel length fiction. There was always going to be a full series of books, but Just Cause was going to be the really epic beginning. The original novel covered some sixty years of history, with historical chapters alternating with the Mustang Sally story set in the present day. Each “flashback” chapter included key plot points that tied into the modern era. When it was all done, I had a burgeoning incomprehensible mess that I didn’t yet have the skills to repair.

After some lengthy discussions with a skilled beta reader, it became apparent that I’d overwritten the darn thing. It needed to go on a serious starvation diet, and so I broke out the metaphorical scissors and went to work. I cut every last one of the historical chapters, setting them aside with a promise to myself that they would in turn become seeds for future projects. When I was finished, my manuscript was some forty thousand words shorter. Think about that, writers. That’s half a book, and I just axed it.

If you need to go get a stiff drink, I’ll wait.

What I was left with was an anorexic tale that only barely scratched the surface of who Mustang Sally really was. It needed a sandwich and milkshake, and so I started writing more. Twenty thousand new words fleshed out the manuscript into a tight, fast-paced story that earned accolades from my beta readers. That manuscript, originally called Just Cause, was renamed Mustang Sally, and made the rounds of agents before once again earning a solid batch of rejections. I’d since continued writing, both in the JCU and outside of it, and by that time I had completed four more books in the series (with tantalizing titles The Archmage, Jackrabbit, Deep Six, and Blackout). I was a better writer, no question about it. Deep Six was a Top 100 Semifinalist in the 2008 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award competition. I went back through Mustang Sally with a red pen once more, this time with intent to make it the first novel-length ebook I released, and early in 2011, I did just that.

Mustang Sally had only been on the market for a couple of months when New Babel Books reached out to me, asking if I would consider making a deal with them for the series. Contracts zipped back and forth between us, and in May of 2011, I took Mustang Sally off sale. Six months later, the book has a swanky new cover that I really like, a sharp design inside, is available for sale from the publisher (http://newbabelbooks.com) as well as on other online retailers, with the strangely familiar title of Just Cause

Funny how things work out that way.

So why write about superheroes at all? What about them appeals to me? Maybe it’s the bright colors of their costumes that make me go all “Oooh! Shiny!” Or maybe it’s the simplification of morals—the perpetual good-guys-versus-the-bad-guys stories that have their foundations in the earliest storytelling done around campfires at the dawn of civilization. Or maybe I just love a good yarn about people with special abilities that make them different—not necessarily better, mind you—than the average schmoe with a mortgage and a job and the requisite 2.1 children. And since there’s been kind of a dearth of those sorts of books, I thought perhaps I’d like to be the one to write them. I’ve loved superheroes as long as I can remember, and the more I write and improve my writing skills, the more I want to apply myself to telling those kinds of stories. I write the stories that I would want to read. And in the end, what could any writer possibly do better for his or her readers?

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And now, Part Seven

It’s Veil War Thursday, and that means that you have another 2000 words of pure, sweet adrenaline.

The goblins charged up the hill, some still carrying banners despite Evans’ best efforts. They were dropping faster now, his men steady and increasingly accurate as the range closed. A thousand monsters from hell charged up the hill and they knelt and fired. He throat tightened as he watched these Marines, his men, perform like nothing he’d ever seen.

Read, enjoy. And since I’m giving you this for free, all I ask is that you tell your friends. Link the Veil War in a status update on Facebook or Google+. Mention it on your blog. Tweet it.

There are even buttons at the bottom of every page here. They have mysterious and arcane names like “StumbleUpon” and “Reddit” and such. I presume that they won’t destroy the world if you click them. And you know what? I think it’s worth the risk.

Remarkable

Our Lady of the Blessed Internets, don’t fail me now…

Consider that Tom Clancy wrote Hunt for Red October before the internet. What an astounding feat. Aside from creating and for a time completely owning a new sub-genre of fiction – the technothriller – think of how he got hold of all the information that he crammed into that book – the verisimilitude he was able to create despite the fact that he was an insurance salesman who had never served in the navy.  He accomplished that feet without once using a computer. Not once! He flipped through the pages of actual books, books he had to leave his house and drive to go see.

While I do not need to do research to come up with the goblins and magic weapons in the Veil War, I do have need occasionally to get details on military technology, or other aspects of the story. What’s the range and actual military name of a light mortar? One step away. What does it sound like when it’s fired? Thank you, YouTube. What’s the terrain like near Rafha, Saudi Arabia? Google Earth can show me. (I should probably dedicate the novel to Google and the Internet instead of my mom.)

I can barely get my head around just how much more difficult it would be without the internets, and I’m not eight years old like my son who quite literally cannot imagine a world without iPads, the Internet and Google.

The funny thing when you start getting deep into the research is the odd places you find gaps. For example, the video feeds from unmanned drones goes somewhere, obviously. But where? What is the actual device that allows soldiers to view the camera images? Wikipedia’s page on the predator doesn’t say. Happily, a Facebook friend of the Veil War set me straight and gave me lots of useful info besides.

If you can believe it, I was actually somewhat conflicted about setting up this website before the story was complete. I worried that it might interfere with my ability to sell the novel. I worried that I wouldn’t get traffic. I worried, in a hazy and non-specific manner that would have made my grandmother proud. Jackass!

Turned out, I couldn’t have made a better choice. I shudder, now, to think of the things that wouldn’t have happened – like the getting the info on the drones, like getting the dope on blast trauma. Like meeting fellow authors stuffed to the gills full of sage advice on publishing that they are clearly just bursting to share. Like typo and error detection in the text. Encouragement, and the hypnotizing trance-like state induced by repeatedly clicking refresh on the stats page.

I swear to God, you lot are kind of creepy, volunteering obscure and arcane knowledge just exactly when I need it. I mean really, how would you know that I need information on US government plans for coping with mass casualty events anyway? Information that would have taken me months to accumulate by painful reading and thinking and sorting you just drop into my lap. Eerie, I tell you. Eerie.

Give it a name

Scalzi has a post that gives a name to the point I raised earlier about the uncanny valley in storytelling.

When my daughter was much younger, my wife was reading to her from a picture book about a snowman who came to life and befriended a young boy, and on each page they would do a particular activity: build a snow fort, slide down a hill, enjoy a bowl of soup and so on. The last three pages had the snowman walking, then running, and then flying. At which point my wife got an unhappy look on her face and said ‘A flying snowman? That’s just ridiculous!’

To which I said: ‘So you can accept a snowman eating hot soup, but not flying?’ Because, you know, if you can accept the former (not to mention the entire initial premise of a snowman coming to life), I’m not sure how the snowman flying became qualitatively more ridiculous.

‘The Flying Snowman Problem’ works as well as a label for the issue as anything, and better than most. Consider it named.

Interstellar snail mail

An update to our earlier post on the Fermi Paradox:

Charlie Stross offers some of his own thoughts about the issue.

Tanenbaum’s Law (attributed to Professor Andrew S. Tanenbaum) is flippantly expressed as, “Never underestimate the bandwidth of a station wagon full of tapes hurtling down the highway”. It’s a profound insight into the state of networking technology: our ability to move bits from a to b is very tightly constrained in comparison with our ability to move atoms, because we have lots of atoms and they take relatively little energy to set in motion.

Read the whole thing. Some of the comments are quite interesting as well:

Remembering how paranoid some of the denizens are here, can I point out the beautiful absurdity of message missiles and message laser?

“No, you idiot, I wasn’t trying to bomb your planet, I was trying to send you a copy of the Encyclopedia Galatica with instructions for planetary peace and interplanetary governance. It wasn’t supposed to take out your space station. Really. Now turn off that terawatt message laser please, before it fries our launch facility so that we can try again? Okay?”

Interstellar war or peaceful contact. What if you can’t tell the difference?

Good stuff. An essential problem in interstellar relations is the bare fact that any means of transportation or communication across light-year scale distances is, inherently, a weapon of vast destructive power.

Addendum: If you’re really interested in all of the above, you will likely want to read this and perhaps this.

Neo Feudalism

This is interesting, if I do say so myself. And in this case, I do.

In the context of the Veil War, thinking like this will be relevant in two ways – one, the eventual defense of the earth will come to depend on this sort of thing. And also, the reasons why the medieval knight became extinct on our world as a result of arms technology outstripping armor technology may not obtain everywhere. And societies will change – or not change – in consequence.

The set up – blogging

I’m trying out a new blogging tool for the iPad, Blogsy. So far, I’m liking it.

Up until now, my primary blog tool whilst on the go has been the free WordPress app. It’s adequate in most respects and actually as good or better than most of the paid apps I’d tried, like BlogPress and others. A key feature is that it allows me to manage comments and check stats easily. Where it falls down is in what one might imagine to be a core competency – ease of actually writing and posting. The interface for composing and editing posts is unintuitive and aesthetically lacking. And it makes many things that should be easy… not so easy.

Having played with it all morning, I think this app will be a clear improvement in the posting and writing department. The writing interface is clean and simple, and all the nifty tools for simple formatting, link-adding and media search are arrayed in two menu bars across the top and right.

One nifty thing about this app is a slick built-in media adder thingy.  For example, you can pull up Google image search or a Flickr account from within the app and drag images and whatnot right into your post.  Say I’d like to have a picture of a pretty unicorn.

Boom. That took two seconds. Trust me. It’s a lot easier than copying and pasting image code or other, more frustrating techniques of getting images into posts. There’s also a bookmarklet for sending an image link to Blogsy, but I haven’t tried that yet. Might could be useful. And apologies to Indigo R. Wake for copying, altering and redistributing his pretty unicorn image. Lighten up, Francis.

The big downside is that Blogsy entirely lacks the ability to check stats or manage comments. Which means I either keep the WordPress app for those things, or else do them in Safari or use WordPress on my phone. Or I can download more apps… I know there are stats apps, but is there a comment management app? Probably.

If I ever need to post from my phone, which is actually fairly unlikely, I’ll just continue to use WordPress. There’s no Blogsy for iPhone and probably that is a good thing. Cramming all that into the iPhone’s limited screen real estate would likely be a disaster.

That covers mobile. As for the big computer at home, I’ve tried desktop blogging tools at various times. But really, the browser interface for WordPress is pretty slick in most regards and paying $40 or more to get the same functionality from MarsEdit just doesn’t make sense and the free blogging applications have generally sucked.

One useful thing, if you’re a Mac user, is Fluid. This is a nifty app – a browser wrapper that allows you to make an app out of a web page. I’ve used Fluid to make a gmail app in the past (though now I use Sparrow – a wonderful gmail client) and now I have a veilwar app in my dock with a custom icon. Having a web page behaving as an app is useful because you don’t have something crucial buried among thousands of tabs. Best thing, it’s free.

I apologize if you’re a windows user and/or Apple hater. This post won’t be very helpful to you. But I’ve been a mac user for about four years now – which started about a year after I spent two weekends rebuilding every machine in my home from the ground up after a pretty nasty virus/rootkit incident. My loathing for windows solidified somewhere around the third time I reformatted, reinstalled XP, set up the security software, reinstalled all my programs, and re-migrated all the essential data. The next computer I bought was a MacBook.

Now I think I’ll have to go look at stats apps…

I think this applies to you

I think this is a good theory on why the nitpicking seems focused on certain topics here. (Mind you, I don’t mind the nitpicking. But you weren’t complaining about bulletproof magical armor.)

Well. That’s fairly comprehensive

The folks over at io9 have compiled a table of the rules of magic from fifty different books, series, tv shows and movies. I can assure you that magic in the Veil War doesn’t work exactly like any of those.